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field notes / 11.1 Stakeholder communication and solution presentation

How do you explain your system to someone who will never read the code?

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The idea in one line: explain your system on one page with the same five parts every time, so a decision-maker can check it.

The person who approves your system will almost never read the code. They have four questions: what does this do for me, can I believe it, what could it get wrong, and what does it cost.

If you don't answer those in about a page, an excellent system can still go unused.

The format that answers them is a solution memo, a short written document for a decision-maker. A good one has the same five parts every time. That repetition is the point, because readers learn where to look.

Here's the analogy. A nutrition label doesn't describe how the food was cooked. It lists a fixed set of facts in a fixed order, in units anyone can compare, and you can read three of them in ten seconds. Nobody has to trust the cook. Your memo is the label on your system.

flowchart TD
    P["1 The problem"] -->|then| W["2 What it does"]
    W -->|then| N["3 Numbers + how to check"]
    N -->|then| M["4 Must never do"]
    M -->|then| C["5 Cost"]
    C -->|read by| D["A decision-maker who will never read the code"]
    N -.->|the part that converts| T["Trust"]

Here is the template. Copy it into your project.

1. The problem. One or two sentences, in the stakeholder's own words. What is slow, costly or error-prone today?

2. What the system does. The process in plain steps: what goes in, what comes out, who sees it. No technology words they didn't use first.

3. The numbers, and how to check them. Each claim paired with how the reader can verify it themselves: where to look, what to count.

4. What it must never do. The hard limits, stated flatly. What it won't send, won't change, won't decide alone.

5. What it costs. Per unit of work, plus what happens if usage doubles. Relative to the manual way.

Part 3 does the work, because adjectives ask the reader to take your word.

A claim with no way to check it is an adjective.

Part 4 is the one people most often leave out, and often the one a cautious reader trusts most.

Real-world example: seven searches out of eight

Our agency sends clients reports on how their brand shows up when people ask AI assistants questions. The first reports we could have written were full of adjectives: strong presence, healthy visibility, good momentum.

Instead each report leads with a fact the reader can verify: "You appear in 7 of 8 searches we ran, and the one you are missing is the broadest one." A client can run those eight searches in an afternoon. The sentence also names the gap, which tells the reader we're describing their situation, not selling them one.

The checkable number converts, and praise does not. The same rule runs through Deployed, our job board, where pages are banned from hand-typed numbers: every count renders from the live database, and where there is no verified number the page says nothing.

See it yourself (2 minutes)

Tell any AI chat about something you built or could build. Then ask:

The rewrite is the exercise: "highly accurate" turns into a count the reader can reproduce.

What this means when you build

Every project in this program ends with a memo like this, written for a stakeholder who has never seen your code.

  • Start it at the beginning, not the end. Parts 1 and 4 can be drafted before you build anything, and writing them first tells you what the system has to be.
  • Fill part 3 only with numbers your own harness produced, and next to each one say how the reader can reproduce it.

Check yourself

Rewrite "We have healthy visibility across AI assistants" so a stranger could test it in an afternoon. Which two things must your version contain?

Decide on your answer, then open

A count and the gap, as in "You appear in 7 of 8 searches we ran, and the one you are missing is the broadest." Adjectives cannot be checked, but a client can rerun eight searches. Naming the gap also shows you are describing their situation, not selling.